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Monday, July 10, 2006

Scene 3

 

            Roberto blinked as he found himself in a foggy haze on a hillside.  It was night, and the moon gave a strange eerie glow in the fog.  In the distance he heard voices and the clash of steel.  He crept up the hill to get closer.

            “Clara is mine!” Diego screamed. Clang!

            “You are not worthy of her, you spineless pig!”

            “And what are you worthy of, Juan Pablo? Hmm? Glory and riches and praise?”

            “If I so choose.” Clash!  
            “Well then let us finish this once and for all, shall we? To the death, winner takes all; the inheritance, the girl, the city, all of it.”

            “Excellent.”

            Roberto reached the top of the hill just in time to see his twin sons dueling to the death.  Roberto’s eyes all at once filled with fear, love, worry and pain.  He knew they were both master swords man, but he saw that there was something else Juan Pablo carried with him.

            The brothers fought skillfully, with only the sound of their swords - until Juan Pablo struck Diego’s sword from him.

            “Pitiful, really.”  Juan Pablo mocked.  “You were always trying to live up to me weren’t you?  Always upset you couldn’t be like me.”  He smirked down at Diego.  “Quite pitiful.”

            Juan Pablo stood there, as Diego’s face wrenched in rage.  He edged himself back toward his sword, and picked it up.  He screamed and came charging at Juan Pablo, ready to run him through. Suddenly Juan Pablo pulled out a gun from the small of his back and shot him.  Diego’s body fell back from the blow, and crashed to the ground.

            Juan Pablo slowly walked up to the body.  He picked up Diego’s sword and rammed it through his heart with hatred in his eyes.  “Goodbye, brother.”

            As Juan Pablo walked away Roberto’s eyes filled with tears.  He ran up to his dead son and was sobbing as he held him.  It became dark and lightening flashed across the sky.  At the crack of thunder Diego’s body disappeared.

            “NO!” Roberto wailed as he clawed the ground where his son had laid.

            A splash of water met his face, along with cold, strong hands shaking his shoulders.

            “No!” he cried out again.  Roberto could hear a soft voice in the distance.

            “Shh. Roberto, it’s me.”

            Roberto presently opened his eyes and saw Lucius there with him in the prison cell.

            “It was just a dream.”


Saturday, June 24, 2006

Scene 2

Once again Roberto awoke unaware he had ever been asleep.  This time he woke to the wound of water. At first he was startled, then he heard Lucius’ familiar laugh.

            “Forget again did we?”  he was bent over one of the stone tiles on the floor.

            Roberto gave a frustrated sigh.

            “Don’t worry, at least you’re sleeping.  I had many sleepless nights when I first came.”

            “How can you tell when it is night?”

            “When you’re tired.” Lucius chuckled.  He pried away the stone he had been bent over and took out two wooden bowls.

            “How can you be so happy and cheerful?”

            “Sir, I have learned that in prison,” he handed him one of the bowls, “one must become insane to keep one’s sanity.  Besides,” he patted Roberto on the shoulder, “after 15 years of being alone, I sure am greatful for the company.”

            Lucius walked over to a crevice in the ceiling where water was trickling in.  He held his bowl up to it and filled it with water.

            “Always a blessing, rain.”  Lucius walked over to Roberto and traded his filled bowl for Roberto’s empty one.  "A little extra water that tastes like heaven."

            Roberto took a sip but just as quickly spat it back out.  “This tastes like mud!”

            Lucius looked down in his cup.  “Really?  Well, it’s far better than the beastly foul stuff they give you, right about…” a small flap opened at the bottom of the cell door and a bucket of mush came sliding out, “…now.”

            Roberto looked at the bucket then to Lucius in disbelief.

            “Cheers.” Lucius held up his bowl, and then took a drink.

            Roberto threw down his bowl and stood up beginning to pace.

            “What is wrong?”

            “’What is wrong?!’ What is wrong? I am in prison with the man I hate.  The man I thought was my companion betrayed me.  And I have no idea what is happening to my family…” suddenly Roberto’s face grew long and pale. “My family…”

            “Ah yes, you finally remember your family and how much you love them for the first time in years – and you can’t do anything about it.”

            Roberto glared at Lucius.  “Why are you doing this? Why are you trying to be my friend? You could have killed me in my sleep the last seven days, but you didn’t. Why?”

            “I could ask you the same question, sir.  Here I am a weak man who hasn’t seen the sun in fifteen years.  You could strangle me to death just as sure as I am sitting here.  And yet here we are, still alive.  It’s a strange world we live in isn’t it?”

            “What are you?! How can you be human?  I hate you!  I wanted you dead! I left you here to rot for fifteen years! How can you possible show kindness toward me?”

            Lucius did not speak.  He sat there silently looking down at his bowl of water.

            Roberto gave an exasperated sigh, sat back down, and put his head in his hands.

            “I’ve missed you and your family.” Lucius twiddled his thumbs on his bowl, and gave a silent smile.  “Alejandro must be a man now, mustn’t he?  And what ever happened to Diego and Juan Pablo?”

            Roberto looked up in utter disbelief, but tired of trying to understand Lucius’ strange behavior, he resumed to answer.

            “Yes, Alejandro has grown up.  I am sorry to say that Diego died at the hand of Juan Pablo quite some time ago.”

            While Roberto recalled this memory as a simple fact, Lucius looked heart broken.  He gave a heavy sigh.

            “And Clara?” Lucius asked hopefully.

            Roberto stared off into the distance.  “I wish I knew.”

            “What about Snra. Gonzales?” Roberto suddenly glared at Lucius with fiery eyes, but Lucius kept going.  “Did you ever speak with her about –“

            Lucius was cut off when Roberto had his fist clenched against his throat.

            “You were right,” Roberto said.  “I could kill you.  How dare you ask about her! How dare you continue to love her! I would kill you now, but I don’t know how I would get out of here.” Roberto threw Lucius aside and crouched down in the dark corner.

            Rubbing his neck, Lucius asked, “So is that your plan? Escape? Using me to get out?”

            No reply came, only a groan.

            “I am sorry sir,” Lucius started again. “But I do not know of a way out.  Don’t you think I would have taken it myself by now if I had? In all my years here I have only discovered that this cell is high above the rocks on the shore.  And it is probably the most heavily guarded since you are here now.  Besides, you should know this place better than I.”

            “Although I could call this prison my property at one time, I never spent much time here.” Roberto grunted.

            There was a long eerie silence. Lucius took up the wooden bowls and put them back underneath the floor.  He then continued to search the stones on the wall.  Roberto looked over and watched with curiosity.  Lucius finally found the right brick and carefully pulled it out of the wall.  Behind it was a small piece of flint and iron, same candles, a few books, and a curious looking inkwell and pen.  Roberto shot up and walked over to Lucius.

            “Why didn’t you tell me this was here?”

            “You never asked.”

            “Where did you get all of this?”

            “When you have been here for fifteen years, you tend to get to know the guards.” Lucius tapped his forehead and winked.

            “This is non-regulational!  They should have reported you to me immediately.”

            “Ah,” Lucius held up his finger as if to make a point.  "But if they had, you would not have access to books and candles, and writing parchment now, would you?” Lucius raised his eyebrows the turned back to the hole in the wall and began to take out some of the books.

            “Wooden bowls, books, candles… What else do you have hidden away?”

            “Not much.”

            “Well, where do you keep everything?”

            “Here and there.” Lucius replied as he continued to rummage through the little hole.

            Roberto gave an exasperated sigh.

            “Here, hold these.”  Lucius said as he plopped a few books in Roberto’s hands.

            “What the devil are you looking for?!”

            “This.” Lucius pulled out a small package.  “I found them in Anna Maria’s desk drawer when she told me to get something.  I confronted her about it, and told her she should say something to you.  She encouraged me to keep them, though I don’t know why.  Then, two days after you came back I was locked up here.”

            Lucius handed Roberto the package.  Roberto looked up at him questioningly, but went on and opened the bundle.  They were letters from Don Fernandez to Ana Maria – love letters.  Roberto stood in shock.  He dropped the letters to the floor and held his face in his hands.

            “I am sorry sir…” Lucius replied.

            Roberto looked up suddenly.  “Sorry? Why should you be sorry? Is it not I who blamed you for taking my wife?  Is it not I who locked you away unjustly and without a fair trial?  Why, in the name of all that is holy, should you be sorry?!”  

            There was a silence as Roberto waited for a reply.  When he did not receive on, he went on.

            “I am the only one who deserves to be here.  I cheated, lied, and stole to gain all of my fortune.  I paid no attention to my family, and in result my sons hated each other.  I went around towns and cities as a drunken man taking whatever I wanted, from whom ever I wanted.  Meanwhile, my family was falling apart.  My wife deserted me, my sons hated me, even my best friend ended up to be my worst enemy.”  All of this while Roberto had been pacing the floor, but now he stopped. 

            “But you…” Lucius looked up.  “ You were loyal to me.  You tried to keep my family together.  You were always there for them when I wasn’t. You did nothing but good for me and my family… Then I turned my back on you, blamed you for a crime that wasn’t yours.  Took out all of my troubles on you, and blamed you for what was my fault in the first place…

            “You should hate me! You gave you’re life for me and my family, and I wanted you dead! Why do you still show me kindness? Why are you still so loyal? Why do you not give me death as I deserve?”  Roberto began to break down in tears.  Lucius came by his side.

            “Because,” Lucius whispered.  “Everyone deserves a second chance.  I always had hope that you would see your evil ways, turn from them, and come back to your family, and now you have.

            “All a bit too late.”

            “It’s never too late.” Lucius retorted.

            “I don’t understand how you can be this way.”

            Lucius looked carefully at Roberto’s cold, saddened face.  “Because once, a very long time ago, someone showed the same mercy to me.”

 

 

 

 

but wait folks!... it's not over yet.  stay tuned.


Thursday, June 22, 2006

wow, it has been a while hasn't it? ok, well i was gonna save this for a long while into the story, but i decided to start Act 2 and use flash backs and dialog to explain every thing inbetween to make things a little interesting. haha. so here you go;

 

Act 2;  Scene 1

Don Gonzales woke up to the musty, wet smell of rat.  He looked around and was terrified.  He backed himself up against a wall until his eyes had adjusted.  It was a small room of stone, cold and dark.  Yet some how it looked familiar.

            “Different isn’t it?” came a voice from the shadows.

            “Who’s there?!”

“You don’t remember me?”

            “I cannot see, and I don’t know where I am.”

            A slight chuckle came from the shadows.

            “Why do you laugh at me?”

            “Pardon me sir; it is just that you used to own this godforsaken place.  You used to come here day after day marching up and down the halls, looking for someone to inflict your pain upon.” As the shadowy figure spoke Roberto’s eyes filled with terror and the utmost horror.

            “Ah! So you do remember!  You have been lying there for a week you know.  Knocked out cold from the day the guards drug you in.”

            “Am I ….. Am I….?”

            “Dead?  No, not yet.” With these works the figure stepped out of the shadows and into what little light was in the small cell.  It was Lucius.

            Roberto was shocked.  “You?”

            Lucius nodded.  “Now you see me.  Now you see what it is like to live among the dead.” Lucius sat down on the floor in front of where Roberto still stood, clinging to the wall.

            “I thought you were dead.”

            “Most men here would die after fifteen years.”

            “No, but I-“

            “Ordered them to kill me?” Lucius looked up at Roberto, not vengefully- but with sad eyes.  “Yes, I know.”

            “Then why are you still here? Why am I here?! Why am I stuck here with you?!”  Roberto had pulled himself away from the wall and was now grasping Lucius’ collar.

            Lucius just smiled.

            “What is so amusing?!”

            “How quickly you forget, sir.”

            Roberto threw him to the floor, and pounded on the stone walls.

            Lucius looked at him carefully.  “You mean, you really don’t know do you?”

            Roberto did not respond, he only began to cry and bash his head against the stone.  Lucius ran up to him, and pulled him away from the wall.  Blood trickled down Roberto’s forehead and mingled with his tears.

            “Come, sit.”  Lucius took his arm and propped him against the opposite wall.  Both gave a heavy sigh.

            Lucius started to speak, but then stopped.  Then he began again.

“Well I suppose I should start from the day I arrived…

                        The guards had me locked up in chains when I first came to see you here at La Casa de Muerte.  When I saw you I thought there was hope, that surely you would set me free.  But, you only looked at me and laughed.  You said that you knew what I had done, and that you were the one who had ordered my arrest.  After that I was locked up here.  I don’t know what happened outside these walls, but there was a time when you would come and torture me at least every thirty days.”  Lucius carefully took off his shirt and showed Roberto the many scars on his back and chest.  “And every time you would ask me, ‘Where is she? Where is she?’.  I still don’t understand what you meant.

            “I believe it was…” Lucius looked at the marks on the wall he had made, “three years ago, I heard the guards talking about you and your scandal against Santa Anna.  Then they mentioned Don Fernandez.  I finally figured out that you had been accused of your crime, and that Don Fernandez had orcastrated it so he would take your place as governor.”

            Roberto looked shocked, then pounded his fists on the ground and yelled out profanities while Lucius went on.

            “And so now, here we are servant and master made equals.”

            Roberto stopped his shouting and stared at Lucius.  “Equals! Equals?  No, never, you shall never be my equal.”

            “So be it.”  Lucius leaned back and covered his eyes with his shirt.  “Wake me when you too see stone walls around you and rags on your back just as me, instead of silver and china on a table of food before you.”

            Exasperated Roberto smacked the wall with his hand and sat down again.

 

 


Tuesday, May 02, 2006

ok, well here it is... and then some.  But i warn you, if you didn't read scene 7 you need to b4 u read this, cuz it plays a very important role in the story.... probly the most important so far.

 

Scene 8

 

            Anna Maria began to exit her coach in front of the villa just as another began to pull up.  It was late at night and she could only guess who could be in it.  She waited a moment to see who might get out, but then started to hurry up the front steps of the house.

            “What are you doing here so late?” asked a slurred voice.

            Anna turned around to find her husband, very drunk and upset.  “I was at the Bontero’s and they invited me to stay for dinner.  I thought you would have been home to see the boys, so I didn’t think it would be a problem.” She bit her tongue to keep herself from yelling.  Roberto, however did not.

            “You expect me to believe that?!  I know you…. I know you go out whoring while I am gone!” Roberto was in Anna Maria’s face at this point, and she could smell the stench of liquor on him.

            “That’s not true!” she cried, pushing him away.

            Roberto sluggishly reached into his pocket and pulled out a few pesos.  “You know, it’s funny how much you can find out for so little.”

            “You had some one spy on me?”

            “That’s the best part!” Don Gonzales’ eyes were half shut, and he had an awkward grin on his face. “I didn’t have to! Every body knows…. Every body knows, but me.” He began to laugh, and tilt his pocket flask into his mouth.

            “It’s not true I tell you! You’re just drunk and thinking up silly lies.” by now Anna’s tongue was loose, and neighbors were being woken up.

            “Whether it’s one man, or many… I know it’s true.  And I will find him and hang him from the gallows!”

Mrs. Gonzales rushed inside in fear, and shut the heavy door close behind her.  

Not a moment after it was shut, Roberto threw his glass flask against the door.  It shattered into tiny pieces, which fell to the ground.  Roberto knelt down in the middle of the street and began to wail in agony.

 

Scene 9

 

            Juan Pablo and Diego stood in front of Clara’s house, not even acknowledging each other’s existence, as the church bells could be heard announcing the second hour.  Soon after, Clara herself answered the door.  She carefully walked down the steps of her home gently and quietly.  With her eyes downcast, she spoke.

            “ I wish for you two to bother me no more - ” both of the young men began to protest, “Hear me out! There is, with out doubt, room in my heart for both of you, but obviously both of you cannot claim me as your wife.  And I cannot choose between you.  Therefore, you must choose between yourselves our fate.”

            Without another word she turned and ascended the stairs back into the security of her home, leaving Juan Pablo and Diego speachless.

 


Saturday, April 22, 2006

Scene 7

 

            Juan Pablo and Diego stormed in the door.       

            “Why do you have to step in on my business all the time?” said Diego, waving a handful of wilting flowers in Juan Pablo’s face.

            “It’s not your business! It is mine.  I met her before you ever laid eyes on her.” retorted Juan Pablo.

            “What is wrong with you?  You don’t have enough so you have to take from others?”

            “I am sick of this. Every time I even receive a compliment you look at me with a devil’s eye.”

            “You have always been the favorite.  Every thing goes right for you.  Every one likes you.”

            “Did you ever think that maybe that isn’t my fault?  Did you ever think that maybe if you were a bit more considerate for people you may receive the same treatment?”

            “Considerate?! You only show kindness to receive things in return!”

            “ But I am successful verdad?  Other wise you would not be so jealous!”

            Alejandro ran in and put himself between his two older brothers.  He put his hands on his hips and began to shout.

            “WHY CAN’T YOU JUST GET ALONG?!”

            Lucius stepped in at the sound of Alejandro’s voice. 

“What is going on here?”

Juan Pablo and Diego stood glaring at each other, while Alejandro began to cry.

Chico, why don’t you go and play in the garden.  I will be there in a minute.”

Alejandro slowing trudged off outside.

“Now, gentlemen.  I asked you a question.”

Diego turned and glared at Lucius.  “You have no right to demand an answer from me.  You are not my father.  In fact you are subject to my command, because you serve my father.”

“A part of my service is caretaking for his children.”

“What’s the point Lucius?” asked Juan Pablo.  “No one cares.  Mother is away all the time, and father is never even in his own city.  We are just picking up the pieces they left to get what we want, and there is nothing else we can do.  We have no future to look forward to.  Our father spends it all on bad slave trade, and whisky.”

“There is always hope for a better life.  There is always the possibility of something more, but only if you strive for it.”

Juan Pablo began to raise his voice. “Where?! What do you see here Lucius?! What?  Why do you even stay here?! There is no hope for you either! You will be brought down with the rest of us.  And then at the very end you will leave us.  Then we will have no one, and no future.  So save your pity, save your prayers.  There is nothing you can do to stop what has already been set in motion.” 

            Juan Pablo turned and left.  Diego followed up the stairs, and two doors could be heard slamming.

            Lucius hung his head.  “Oh ye of little faith…”

 

 

.... I am afraid that is all for a while now, because scene eight isn't finished.  The Klimax is finished, but what kind of person would I be if I spoiled the story for you?



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